Comments of this poem (1)
Lyte at 2009-06-05 |
Seriously? write a poem about someone you can actually care about and not someone who will most likely:
1: Never meet you.
2: you'll find out he's a huge lazy bum porn addict.
3: You wont really give a crap about him later because there going to an actually guy who cares about you a heck of a lot more then he would ever. because he's famous, he gives in to the seven deadly sins. that's why we have so many fat old money grubbing movie stars.
And also, practice writing more genaric stuff, That can aply to everyone. It'll definetly help your writing a bunch. and you wont get people like me getting after you for having a crush on someone who is basicly more likely to sprout wings, fly to the moon and have a ham and moon cheese sandwich then to actually have a realationship with a woman that is actually happy. and if he's gay, kudos to him.
So, get a boy friend and write cute stuff to him. not a Tv star. |
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