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by Melody
Rating: 2.50
Votes: 2
You loved me
i loved you
now you love me...
and I hate you!




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Lyte at 2009-06-05

And time passed,
And you lost me,
And I found beauty again.
I fell in love,
And you moved on.
Why didn't you wait a little longer?

Sorry, I couldn't help adding on^^ I think It would have been cuter if you added a second stanza.
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