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by Lil SMilEY
Rating: 4.50
Votes: 2
"Baby, you'll make it, i promise"
You told me that one night
"You can count on me for anything"
But you were no where in sight

"Don't give up you'll make it"
I guess it wasn't true
"I'm sorry, i failed you"
No love, you failed you!

"Don't be sad, it's okay"
You never really proved it to me
"One day its all going to end"
To this day I'm still not free

"Things are going to change, i promise"
Guess what love? they never did, so what happened with that?
"I don't ever want to let you go"
And you did that too, to be exact

"I love you"
Too bad it wasn't true
"I care a lot about you"
Its too bad you lied about that too.




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