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by Jonah pouyot
Rating: 4.00
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Baby from when you leave my arms i fell alone
like a nothing,a shadow, a mystery. and baby you solve all those problems,
you make me cry tears of joy.
you make me fell on top of the world

i go crazy because you make me soo happy because i have a beautiful girl like you.
the touch of your hand on my body turns my skin from cold to hot and the touch of your lips on mine makes me lost in words. you heal the scares in my heart you fix those broken images of dis per to joy you make my life once again amazing and worth living I'm absolutely lost without you and id die if i lost you <3




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Frederic Pouyot at 2008-11-17

This is well written. I am proud of you. You have made great progress in writing. I can relate to these mad love feelings Jonah. Your father was like that when he was your age. I hope all is well for you, and I send you good thoughts.

I know one day you will realize I am a good father father after all. I love you no matter what.
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